A Visual Representation of My Editing Process

This is my story

This is sort of how it looks on the first draft

So then I

 cut!

build!

 

grow!


 
Sometimes it can get away from me

and sometimes I wonder if parts are too straightforward

or if my language is too fancy

or not fancy enough

Mostly, I don't want it to look like this

or make me feel like this

So I'll keep plugging along

and hope to get to this