Wednesday, January 25, 2012

A Visual Representation of My Editing Process

This is my story





This is sort of how it looks on the first draft





So then I
 cut!


build!

 
grow!


 
Sometimes it can get away from me




and sometimes I wonder if parts are too straightforward





or if my language is too fancy





or not fancy enough






Mostly, I don't want it to look like this






or make me feel like this





So I'll keep plugging along





and hope to get to this

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